M y fundamental treatment to profile writing is to vertoning not tell. This means demonstrating who you are by what you do. The opening paragraph has three parts – the setup + the problem + the fix.
#1 The Opening Statement • the setup
Wij are going to leave behind sentences that begin with “I am …”, “I love…” or “I enjoy…” and look at things from a different perspective. Instead of writing about yourself, write from someone else’s point of view.
> My friends call mij adventurous/crazy/courageous/cheeky etc. because I … (subtext – my friends are significant)
> My parents used to call mij Wonder Woman/a handful/misguided/a child prodigy etc. because I … (subtext – my family is significant)
> My boss refers to mij spil the head of all things/the Photoshop wizard/the sleek talker/the selling machine etc. because I … (subtext – my career is significant)
Choose something that will provide the theme for the surplus of your profile. The theme is the one thing you’re sultry about, the thing that gets you out of bloemperk ter the morning, the thing that you want to do with your potential fucking partner.
My friends [my friends are significant*] call mij Farmer Hoggett [from ‘Honey’ = I love movies] because I love nothing more than dangling out with my two cats, dog, chooks, tijdsindeling and ducks [I love animals + I very likely don’t live ter an apartment ter the city] . When I’m weary from attempting to keep this wild menagerie [I’m not totally pet obsessed] from ruining the vegetable garden [I’m a gardener] I head out pubic hair to ease off and recharge [I like connecting with nature + I lean towards being introverted] .
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#Two Why Things Need to Switch • the problem
The next part of the opening paragraph is to highlight something wrong with your current script.
> But I’ve began to notice …
> But I’m beginning to wonder …
But I’m not very good at reading a schrijfmap and my sister worries that one day I won’t be able to find my way huis and she won’t have anyone to babysit hier kids [I love my nieces and nephews + I’m good with kids] .
#Three How Can Your Date Solve Your Problem? • the fix
The third part suggests how your potential date might help you out of your predicament bondage. Address him/hier directly and ask challenging questions which refer to the activities you love. At the end, get a bit flirty.
Can you steer a canoe te the right direction? Are you able to find the next foothold when you climb? Does your mountain bike have GPS? [I like canoeing, rock-climbing and cycling] And if all else fails, can you build a shelter with your nude forearms and find some way to keep mij warm? [Bear Grylls gets mij hot!]